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Alyssa Fu Ward, PhD's avatar

So many good points packed into this article. That AI is really just squeezing words into a statistical mean. Sanitizing words and situations that carry emotion and candor. That last one in particular struck me. By default, I couldn’t see myself writing, “This is insane. There is no way we can…” I’m not good at setting boundaries like this at work. So it’s interesting to add on the other layer of — how can I have AI help me with those boundaries while also not sanitizing the message?

Thank you for this thoughtful article!

Tekla Szymanski's avatar

I agree with many of your points on how to sound human again, but not with your suggestion to "find the 'passive voice' (a classic AI tell) and flip it to active voice." Passive voice is an important tool for a writer and has its place. It should not be feared as a classic AI tell. I don't think the active sentence "The boy chases the girl" is better (or more correct) than the passive "The girl was chased by the boy." Writing in the passive voice is a stylistic choice. You use the active voice to focus on the boy. By using the passive voice, you highlight the girl (and increase tension in the scene). Which of the two focus points you choose at the end will depend entirely on the narrative and not on a rigid grammar rule or the fear of sounding like a bot. Neither choice is the "right" one. Choosing the active or passive voice depends on context. Let's not give AI the power to hold back our human way of writing. TY

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